答案:A Letter to Cousin18th,December [1]Dear Mike, [2]Your first winter holiday in college is approaching. Do you have any idea of how to spend it? [3]I can share with you my ideas.[4]First,you can keep focusing on your study,if you want.After half a year in college,you already have a general idea about campus study.[5]So in the holiday,it can benefit you to keep studying for more knowledge to prepare for future learning in the long run.[6]Second,if you want to go out for relaxing,traveling can be fun.[7]It will broaden your horizons.[8]Third,taking part in some social activities,like volunteer work,is also a good choice.[9]It can improve your interpersonal skills and teamwork spirit. Please tell me what your choice will be. [10]Wish you a delightful and meaningful winter holiday. Best regards, Ann[本题分数]: 106.0 分【答案解析】[1]注意称呼前面不要空格,称呼后用逗号。 [2]提出winter holiday这个话题,并用疑问句引出书信的主体内容。approach“临近”是亮点词汇。 [3]用I can share...引出自己的建议,很自然。 [4][6][8]由First...Second...Third...分三条列举建议,各种方式后面顺带说其好处,即在列举建议时,将提纲中的第1点和第2点结合起来说。 [4]keep focusing on...“继续把精力集中在……”为亮点表达。 [5]benefit sb.“对……有益处”;in the long run“从长远来看”。 [7]broaden one's horizon“使某人开扩视野”。 [8]take part in...“参加……”;volunteer work“志愿者工作”。 [9]interpersonal skills“人际交往能力”;teamwork spirit“团队精神”;均表达地道。 [10]书信正文部分的祝福语,也是提纲中的第3部分。delightful“愉悦的”、meaningful“有意义的”均为亮点词汇。 [写作指南] 本题是书信作文,内容非常明确,结构也一目了然。重点是提纲中的第1点和第2点的内容。要注意,由于文体是书信,应该先寒暄,再引出话题;接着分条列举建议的几种度假方式。最后是书信的结尾,写一些祝福的话语即可。由于写信的对象比较亲近,所以写信的语言应该是非正式的,且和口语接近。