答案:【计分规则】: Part Oone:Introduction该部分内容需包括:Use a hook to catch reader's attention, set a scene,present a thesis statement Part Two: Body该部分内容需包括:1、按照逻辑顺序继续写作(chronological order/ order of importance);2、topic sentence(give the main idea)3、developing sentences(give details to support the topic sentence);4、Do not just list events and relate the event you give to the thesis statement. Part Three:Conclusion该部分内容需包括:1、Provide a sense of clusure or ending in the conclusion 2、What you have learned from the story?/ Why the story is important?