简要陈述你从中学到了什么。
简要陈述你从中学到了什么。
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答案：[答案]One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said,“Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.[解析]这是一篇看图作文,要求我们仔细观察图片,弄清楚里面发生的事情,用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来,并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。因此写作前,要仔细看图片,了解图片中所发生的事情,并提炼出要点,列出所要用到的词汇、短语等,或者列出大概的写作提纲。通过分析可知,这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时态,注意谓语动词形式的变化,尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序,这样可以使文章条理清楚。还需注意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同,不能逐词去翻译,应从句子整体考虑,使用简单句的基本句型,如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式,调整文章节奏,提升文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯。点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,符合图片所传达的信息,表述准确。作者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述,条理清晰。文章最后的两句话也点明了文章的主题。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以一般过去时态为主,谓语动词用了过去式,尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式,如found, kept, got, were, spoke等。语法规范、准确。短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语,如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句;再如So they decided to do something for the young tree这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth.决定做某事;After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of等等。
